The millionaire’s son had only five days left to live. But the poor little girl sprayed him with unusual water.
In the hallway of San Gabriel Hospital, in Mexico City, the air smelled of disinfectant and reheated coffee. At this hour, the white light from the fluorescent tubes made everything look colder: the walls, the faces, even the hands.
Rodrigo Acevedo couldn’t stop shaking.
He had been living in a vinyl chair for three weeks, with his wrinkled jacket, unshaven face, and the phone glued to his ear as if that could change anything. His son, Pedro, only three years old, lay connected to monitors that beeped with cruel patience. Every day, the boy grew lighter, paler, as if he was disappearing.
When Dr. Santiago Flores, the head of pediatrics, asked to speak "calmly," Rodrigo felt the floor beneath him tilt.
“Mr. Acevedo... we need to be honest,” the doctor said, choosing his words as if they were glass. “We’ve tried everything possible. Six treatment plans, specialists, studies... Pedro’s condition is extremely rare. In the few documented cases worldwide... none had a favorable outcome.”
Rodrigo clenched his fists.
“How long?” he asked, his voice breaking.
The doctor lowered his gaze.
“Five days. Maybe a week, if we’re lucky. The only thing we can do now is keep him comfortable. Make sure he doesn’t suffer.”
Rodrigo felt something inside him collapse silently. He looked back at his son: so small in that bed, surrounded by tubes. Pedro had always been laughter, running, sticky hands from sweets. Now, he looked like a fragile little figure, ready to break.
“There has to be something more…” Rodrigo insisted, grabbing the doctor by the arm. “Money is no issue. I’ll bring in people from anywhere.”
“We’ve consulted with the best, both here and abroad,” the doctor said gently. “Sometimes, medicine reaches its limits... I’m sorry.”
When the doctor left, Rodrigo sat next to the bed and took Pedro's cold little hand. The boy moved faintly, as if hearing him from far away. Rodrigo couldn’t hold back the tears.
“How am I going to tell Clara?” he thought.
His wife was in Guadalajara for a medical conference. She would return in two days. Two days. And his son had five left.
The door opened again. Rodrigo wiped his face, expecting a nurse. But a little girl walked in.
Small. Six years old, maybe. She wore a worn school uniform and a big brown sweater. Her dark hair was messy, as if she had been running. She held a cheap golden plastic bottle in her hands.
“Who are you?” Rodrigo asked, confused. “How did you get in?”
The girl didn’t answer. She walked straight to the bed, climbed up on a stool, and looked at Pedro with a seriousness that didn’t match her face.
“I’m going to save him,” she said, and opened the bottle.
“Hey, wait!” Rodrigo jumped up.
But it was too late.
The girl poured water over Pedro's face. The liquid slid down his cheek and soaked the pillow. Rodrigo gently but firmly pushed her away and snatched the bottle from her.
“What are you doing? Get out of here!” he shouted, pressing the call button.
Pedro coughed a little… and stayed asleep.
The girl stretched out to grab the bottle back, desperate.
“He needs it,” she insisted. “It’s special water. He’s going to get better.”
“You don’t understand anything…” Rodrigo trembled with rage and fear. “Get out before I call security!”
Two nurses rushed in.
“What happened?” one asked.
“This girl came in and poured water on my son,” Rodrigo said, holding up the bottle as evidence.
From the hallway, a female voice thundered:
“Valeria! What did you do?”
A woman entered, dressed in housekeeping attire, in her thirties, her eyes red from worry.
“Sorry, sir,” she said, pulling the girl by the hand. “I’m Marina. She’s my daughter. She shouldn’t have entered. We’re leaving.”
The little girl sobbed.
“Mom, I just wanted to help Pedro!”
Rodrigo froze.
“Wait…” he said, stopping the woman. “How does your daughter know my son’s name?”
Marina swallowed hard.
“I… I’ve worked here for years. Maybe she saw it on the door…”
“No,” the little girl interrupted, pulling away slightly. “I know him! We played together in Aunt Marta’s kindergarten. He’s my friend.”
Rodrigo felt a sharp pang in his chest.
“What kindergarten?” he whispered. “My son never went to any kindergarten. He has a nanny at home.”
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Rodrigo stared at the girl, his mind racing. The mention of “Aunt Marta’s kindergarten” didn’t make any sense. His son had always been at home with the nanny. He had never attended any kind of school. But the girl spoke with such certainty, her voice quivering with a sense of guilt and sorrow that Rodrigo couldn’t ignore.
Marina’s face paled. She glanced down at her daughter, who was sobbing uncontrollably, and then back at Rodrigo, her expression strained, like she was caught in something far bigger than herself.
“I… I don’t know what she’s talking about,” Marina said, her voice quivering. “She has an imagination. She… she has to. There’s no way she could know—”
But Rodrigo wasn’t listening anymore. His mind was spinning, trying to piece together the impossible connection between this child and his son. His breath quickened, his heart raced. It was as if his whole world was being shattered by a simple truth that he couldn’t see, yet felt closing in on him.
“What if…” Rodrigo thought, his chest tightening. “What if Pedro… Pedro was meant to be saved, but in a way we don’t understand?”
The nurses stood frozen, unsure of what to do. Marina opened her mouth, about to speak again, but Rodrigo cut her off.
“I need to get to the bottom of this,” he muttered to himself, already turning towards the door.
He couldn’t shake the feeling that the girl knew something—something he needed to know. He had to find out the truth. He wasn’t leaving this hospital until he did.
As Rodrigo walked past the nurses and out the door, Marina tried to stop him. “Sir, please, just let it go. It’s for the best.”
But Rodrigo was determined. He would find answers, no matter what it took.
And then he saw it—the small, inconspicuous sign outside the hospital’s pediatric ward. It was barely noticeable, tucked in the corner of the door. A name he’d never seen before: “Marta Ramirez, Director of Child Care.”
Rodrigo’s blood ran cold.
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To Be Continued...
This continuation introduces a twist where the past and present collide, leading to unanswered questions about Pedro's connection to the mysterious girl. It sets up a suspenseful and dramatic path, leaving the reader eagerly anticipating the next revelation.
